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Farewell

Are my screams not loud enough?
Perhaps now you’ll hear…
Why didn’t you love me?
I knew you didn’t care…
I loved you always.
Even until the end.
It’s time to take me leave.
You should’ve been there.
I faced my pain alone.
No one was there.
Me emotions fought against me.
You’ll never know the torment.
I cried and cried for you.
But I couldn’t find you.
Now, I choose to be alone.
Thanks to you, it isn’t that bad.
I hope you suffer alone like I did.
One day, you’ll search for me.
The perhaps you’ll love and want me.
And I’ll treat you like you treated me.
I wonder if then you’ll be the same.
Will I still be your perfect one?
But for now it’s time to end it.
Farewell…………
©2003-2009 ~bladeangel-neo
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Author's Comments

Humans, as social creatures, need social interaction. Especially when emotion is involved. Time alone is good, but too much can cause emotional torment. Eventually, lonliness can ruin one's better judgemen, sanity, and can cause an emotional breakdown. That is what I tried to convey in this poem. plz comment

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:iconspider-punk:
Wow. Story of my life man! Great work.. *sits to let it sit in*

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-Jonathan Sporadic

"Can't you tell what I'm thinking by the look in my eyes?
When I look into yours I can read your mind."
:iconlunaflare:
Awesome :D (Big Grin) I love the doubled-voice type thing with the italics. I'm a sucker for poetry like this ;) (Wink)
+fav!
:icondaymare01:
Very nice. I love it.

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Religion cannot be without morality, but morality may arrive without religion.
:iconlittlepoet321:
I can relate to it in my poetry too.

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June 15, 2003

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